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Title: poem.
Post by: jahbless on April 14, 2005, 10:51:09 PM
overtake deep dusty mountain
overcome bruise demolish grind
   baffle claw & outdo sting
        question trouble
               strike
               prove
               build
           die awake.


please excuse my poetry, its not good but i figured i would post some anyway....
Title: Re: poem.
Post by: jahbless on April 14, 2005, 11:33:48 PM
lol i ddint even see the tree myself [smiley=laugh.gif] but it makes sense! thats the beauty of havin others look at your poems..you get alot of interesting interpretations and unique insight!
Title: Re: poem.
Post by: staci on April 15, 2005, 03:52:05 PM
or a cocktail glass. lol. really thats what it looks like to me.
onelove
respectforall
Title: Re: poem.
Post by: Amish2 on April 16, 2005, 04:22:16 PM
I think it's rteally good.