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jahbless

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poem.
« on: April 14, 2005, 10:51:09 PM »

overtake deep dusty mountain
overcome bruise demolish grind
   baffle claw & outdo sting
        question trouble
               strike
               prove
               build
           die awake.


please excuse my poetry, its not good but i figured i would post some anyway....
« Last Edit: April 14, 2005, 10:52:07 PM by jahbless »
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jahbless

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Re: poem.
« Reply #1 on: April 14, 2005, 11:33:48 PM »

lol i ddint even see the tree myself [smiley=laugh.gif] but it makes sense! thats the beauty of havin others look at your poems..you get alot of interesting interpretations and unique insight!
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staci

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Re: poem.
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2005, 03:52:05 PM »

or a cocktail glass. lol. really thats what it looks like to me.
onelove
respectforall
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Amish2

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Re: poem.
« Reply #3 on: April 16, 2005, 04:22:16 PM »

I think it's rteally good.
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